Do you remember
Take 1 - I like the imagery in this piece but not sure about the format - so I'll probably try similar words in different formats - stay tuned 🙃
Do you remember my heart stopping in your hands when you said goodbye? The warm September we were rolling in the leaves frolicking like kids? That dark January our lips met for the first time crystals in our hair? Glowing up the night sparks igniting between us thinking forever? But embers grow cold it was only there and then for you, by April I was history spirit quiet like the woods melting snow angel Do you remember my soul dripping down your arms when you waved goodbye?
I'll just clap. I'm clapping.
Love it Boo, I still don't really know how to properly comment on poetry, I'm new to reading and writing it, but I know what I like and what works and this does.