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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Where I come from,

they are embers of stars

fallen from wishes

ignited many moons ago.....I love this ❣ powerful ending too. Yessss!

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Boo Pfeiffer's avatar

Thank you so much, Maryellen!!

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Poetry Tracks In Snow Holly L's avatar

Such a powerful transition and thoughtful ending. 💛💛💛

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Boo Pfeiffer's avatar

Thank you!!

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Allegra's avatar

A moving piece, an ember that slowly turns into a flame of meaning :)

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Stephanie M. Vargo's avatar

A poem that makes you smile and then saddens. Very moving.

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Boo Pfeiffer's avatar

Thank you for reading!

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

I agree, Boo! They should be free to shine. Lovely post. <3

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Just Kayla's avatar

Beautiful

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Boo Pfeiffer's avatar

Thank you

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A Ikram Poetry | Healing 🍉's avatar

such a pretty poem!

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Joe Nichols's avatar

Lightning bugs! Lovely piece Boo.

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Nazish Nasim's avatar

Lovely, Boo

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