Thank you so much! It was a challenge to do everything I wanted to do with it and so few words, but also, I'm so much more of a poet than the storyteller… So thank you for getting it!
WHOA! This was a wild ride! The concept that the surgery made her able to see the birth of the universe is wildly unique and I love the way you prefaced it with the line about not being able to see the inside of your eyelids.
This may be my favorite piece of yours that I've read. Amazing work!
Wow! If I was ever considering eye surgery you can bet I ain't now!!!
I love the shift from you "can't" to you "shouldn't". I love that she left Chris too. Great piece
Thank you so much. Thanks for catching the shift….
I was wondering what the screaming was about. Great job!
Thank you so much! It was a challenge to do everything I wanted to do with it and so few words, but also, I'm so much more of a poet than the storyteller… So thank you for getting it!
Boo this is brilliant. The big bang?! I wanna see it too. Omgosh this is so creative. I love it.
WHOA! This was a wild ride! The concept that the surgery made her able to see the birth of the universe is wildly unique and I love the way you prefaced it with the line about not being able to see the inside of your eyelids.
This may be my favorite piece of yours that I've read. Amazing work!