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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Wonderful! I really enjoyed the rhythm of this piece. The short and quick lines really created tension as it went on. Thanks for tagging me so I could check it out!

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Boo Pfeiffer's avatar

Thank you for the inspiration!!

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Poetry Tracks In Snow Holly L's avatar

Boo - this makes me so sad

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Boo Pfeiffer's avatar

I'm sorry to make you sad, Holly! But also, thank you?

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

Oh god I know that menacing rottweiler. Waiting for a sign of weakness, then it pounces! Great write.

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Boo Pfeiffer's avatar

I’m sorry about your Rottweiler! And thank you.

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