I hope you enjoy the sequel to “Cherries & Bitters.” Madness & Mayhem Day 12 was to write a journal entry as one of our characters, and I had been asked for a sequel to this piece, so, here’s WITSEC.
I love how the voice in this journal entry felt real and cohesive throughout. You did an amazing job of stepping into the character's voice and mindset here! There were a lot of really good details, too, like how she almost called him by his real name midway through.
I love this story as well; you can really feel the heartache that the main character feels through her words. An excellent sequel and an even better response to today's prompt!
Peachy! I love the anxiety in this and the writing is so good. Thanks for this. xx
Thank you so much!
What a brilliant take on someone's mind and diary entry (in WITSEC). Hooked, Boo! Is a sequel coming?
Thank you! Yes, actually (: I started working on part 3 last night :-)
I love how the voice in this journal entry felt real and cohesive throughout. You did an amazing job of stepping into the character's voice and mindset here! There were a lot of really good details, too, like how she almost called him by his real name midway through.
I love this story as well; you can really feel the heartache that the main character feels through her words. An excellent sequel and an even better response to today's prompt!
Thank you so much! I really like these characters... maybe Rob/Jason has a diary too?!
Love that idea! I think the format works incredibly well for this story!