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Poetry Tracks In Snow Holly L's avatar

red raindrops

staining summer snow - I actually gasped at the world turned upside down….terrifyingly

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J. Katz's avatar

Find something I like…

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Douglas Bruton's avatar

I like this one a lot. So full of feeling xxx

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Nazish Nasim's avatar

This is one of your best poems, Boo..absolutely gutting.

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Boo Pfeiffer's avatar

Thank you, Naz. I wish I hadn’t had to write it ….

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

This was incredibly well done, Boo, perhaps the best piece I’ve read from you. The unraveling of society and nature is palpable here.

The overarching sense of dread is nearly overwhelming. The way the piece shows how things aren’t quite right without ever coming out and saying it is powerful.

I’m so sorry for some of the things that inspired this, but the message here is loud and clear. This is truly great writing.

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

Oh my god Boo! It feels like humanity is coming apart at the seams, and it kills me.

Beautiful rendering. <3

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Boo Pfeiffer's avatar

Welcome to the USA, 2025 🙁

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