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Douglas Bruton's avatar

This was fun. Thanks

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Boo Pfeiffer's avatar

Thank you for reading!!

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That Pesky Lawyer's avatar

Has my evil Gemini twin seen this? 😀

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Boo Pfeiffer's avatar

Nahh…I don’t think she knows I write ():

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Wow, this was an excellent take on the prompt, Boo! I am always impressed with how you go from poetry to prose without missing a beat. Your writing style and voice is distinctly you, and I love the way the character's personality comes through in the narration.

This piece also had excellent layers to it with the AI, the medical implications of the gel, and of course, the protagonist's struggle to decide what is "right" here. I loved how you made them wrestle with it throughout the piece.

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Boo Pfeiffer's avatar

Thank you! Poetry comes more naturally… But sometimes I have too much to say lol.

The writers chat just disappeared from my chat list… Did I get disengaged?

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

The chat is looking weird for me as well. I'm looking into the issue now. I'll be posting today's prompt soon, so hopefully it will pop back up for you then. Let me know if you're still not seeing it in an hour or two and I'll dig deeper.

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